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DNAngel Epilogue: Part3 Eng.

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"Satoshi-kun! Hiwatari-kun! Hey, wake up!" Daisuke shouted. He carefully shook the motionless Satoshi in his arms. "Hey, what's the matter?! Hiwatari!" No reaction. Almost bursting into tears, he put his hand on Satoshi's chest. He felt it lift and lower slightly, and he felt Satoshi's heart pounding fast – alarmingly fast! 'Thanks God, he is alive!' Daisuke thought, anxious. He felt eased now, but he was still in despair. He touched Satoshi's forehead; it was all warm. 'He has a fever? That's bad, I better bring him home; he should stay in bed…' He looked around in panic.
Suddenly Satoshi slowly opened his eyes and whispered weakly: "Forgive me Niwa... I am sorry I just passed out. I'll go home." Before Daisuke even tried or dared to interrupt him, he realized that it was obvious that Satoshi was about to faint again as soon as he would say another word. After speaking those few sentences, Satoshi was gasping for air already. He tried to rise, but failed again. Daisuke held him, worried. "Please stay here. You're sick, you need to rest. You won't be able to get anywhere in this condition." Daisuke gently wiped off some drops of cold sweat from Satoshi's face. Finally Satoshi gave up. After all he was too weak to resist. "As… you wish… I am sorry..." He whispered, and then he collapsed for a second time.
Without the slightest hesitations, Daisuke put Satoshi on his back and carried him to his house. He did not know how his family was going to react, but what he knew was that he could not have left Hiwatari alone. While he was carrying his unconscious friend home, he thought
'I need to help him. No matter what Mother and Grandpa are going to say. I hope he will be well soon. Since he never attended sport class with us, he must be kinda frail. Hopefully the fever is not too high… 'He is breathing hard, I hope he'll be alright. His heart is pounding like insane!'
Part 3!
Well, I decided to use the suffix again.
Oh, and I have no idea about the category.

It may not be the longest part, but I do not really have any ideas.Since I am not a a native speaker, it takes me a little long to write these. In fact, I had almost written this some weeks ago, but I finished it today. GOMEN NASAI >_<
I apologize for errors or/and misspellings.

Part2:
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Sorry, it gets shounen-aiish >w<
(c) Characters by Yukiru Sugisaki
Story and writing by me

Enjoy~
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kaitou-hikarii's avatar
hiwatari-kuuuun! :O
what's happened to him?! :O x